Katie and the Christmas Chimney

           Today I learned how to create a Story web

 Katie and the Christmas Chimney

Title: Katie and the Christmas Chimney

Author: Bertie

Setting: Inside and outside the classroom

Characters: Katie, Mr Old, Samantha, Isis.

Beginning

In history lessons Katie and her classroom learning about Queen Victoria who reigned over Great Britain from 1837 to 1901. It was an amazing period when engineers built tunnels, bridges, and railways, and explorers trekked through the jungles, and writers turned out some of the best novels and poems ever.

Middle: Katie shook her head what trauma her Parents are filthy rich. She’s spoilt because her lifes too cushy. “Oh, Katie!” said Isis with a sigh, “Everyone has their weak and vulnerable spots. Come on. Let’s help her. I’ve got such a crazy idea. Wouldn’t it be amazing if Santa came down the chimney at the Christmas party and gave everyone presents? That would be truly magical – and healing – and I’m sure she would be a better person afterwards.”

End Santa came down the chimney.

Evaluation It was a very interesting story.  5/10

Treaty of Waitangi

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All About Me

Here is my google drawing telling you all about me.

Cultural Festival 2016

On Saturday it was cultural  Festival at rocket park at mt Albert Owairaka groups performed at the stage and other school performed to their were lots of groups. The Scottish group was so good and their were wearing different clothes. 

Scottish Group

Tongan Group 

Samoan Group 

My Speech

AMy Speech

Title:

WALT: write a speech

Remember to:

• followed the hamburger technique
• check that message/information/story is clear
• a have ending that is effective & finishes off the speech
• write my ideas in a logical order
• check my speech is suited to my target audience
• write my speech in my words

Lions are very interesting animals. That is why I have chosen to talk about them. My name is Farman and I am going to talk to you about The King of the Jungle.

I'm going to  talk about the lion which is a predator. The lion is one of the strongest and most dangerous predators in the world. As the king of the jungle the lion have both beauty and the strength.

Lions are from the cat family and are a large tawny coloured cat.They are found in Africa and North West India.

Lion are symbols of strength and courage

and have been celebrated throughout

history for these characteristics.

Lion usually hunt at night their prey includes Antelopes, buffaloes, zebras, rhinos, hippos, crocodiles, giraffes and wild pigs.

Lion are the only big cat to live in groups called prides lion use plants to hide behind so they can hunt prey.

Lion are my favourite animals because they

are strong, fierce and kill easily. Thank you for listening.

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Confident me

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Today I ahve amde a Tagul about being confident.

Olympic Writing

As you know, the Olympic Games have started over in Rio.  We will use this great festival of sport for our prompt this week.

It is:

…I could see the finish line, then

Things to consider:

• Which sport is this?
• What might be going to happen?
• How do you feel?

I could see the finish line, then the gun blew and the race was on. I ran fast as I past the fourth runner then the third runner.  The second and the first runner were so fast Then I speed up and caught up to the second runner. It was hard  then I  past  him I was up to the first runner. And I beat  the first runner and won the gold medal.