Today I learned how to create a Story web
Katie and the Christmas Chimney
Title: Katie and the Christmas Chimney
Author: Bertie
Setting: Inside and outside the classroom
Characters: Katie, Mr Old, Samantha, Isis.
Beginning
In history lessons Katie and her classroom learning about Queen Victoria who reigned over Great Britain from 1837 to 1901. It was an amazing period when engineers built tunnels, bridges, and railways, and explorers trekked through the jungles, and writers turned out some of the best novels and poems ever.
Middle: Katie shook her head what trauma her Parents are filthy rich. She’s spoilt because her lifes too cushy. “Oh, Katie!” said Isis with a sigh, “Everyone has their weak and vulnerable spots. Come on. Let’s help her. I’ve got such a crazy idea. Wouldn’t it be amazing if Santa came down the chimney at the Christmas party and gave everyone presents? That would be truly magical – and healing – and I’m sure she would be a better person afterwards.”
End Santa came down the chimney.
Evaluation It was a very interesting story. 5/10
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