As you know, the Olympic Games have started over in Rio. We will use this great festival of sport for our prompt this week.
It is:
…I could see the finish line, then
Things to consider:
- Which sport is this?
- What might be going to happen?
- How do you feel?
I could see the finish line, then the gun blew and the race was on. I ran fast as I past the fourth runner then the third runner. The second and the first runner were so fast Then I speed up and caught up to the second runner. It was hard then I past him I was up to the first runner. And I beat the first runner and won the gold medal.
Hi Farman, I like the story you made of the Olympics. It reminded of when I watch some of the running on TV. Next time maybe describe how you felt about winning. From Tobi.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Farman My name is Levi C from Grey Main school. I like how your telling me all about your Olympics writing. I think it's Ka mau te wehi (Awesome). maybe next time you cold work on some more capital letters. did you enjoy putting it on to your blog.
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